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[Mind Crushing]

Could definetly use some vocals

The song really felt empty in certain spots. Maybe you could contract Twilight Necrosis or possibly Crucified- they would do a killer job. Song was pretty sweet though, but I wish you would've been able to raise the volume just a bit.

10/10
5/5

Dimoria responds:

That can be arranged ;) But this song needs to be remade with my new sound etc.
And I plan on doing that.

[Beneath Wishes]

Shame this is one of your higher rated songs

First let me say this is a really great song. I just wish some of your other work was higher rated. The only real flaw I could find for this song is it felt a little dragged out, like you couldn't figure out a proper ending. That was the main fault. I think maybe you should try to remaster it this time and maybe change your riffs a little from the regular old dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dah. switch it up a little bit. Its obvious you are a good guitar player, you just need to take that next step.

10/10
5/5

Dimoria responds:

I had 4 days for this song. A battle song is usually atleast 3 minutes long. The reason why it is so long drawn is because it makes the song loop better. And with symfonic pieces and all it took me 4 days. And the dun dun dun you are talking about is triplets which I find gives one the feeling of action. Since it is so la la la.
And when you remaster something , it is when you change the sound. Not a part of the song.

[mac and cheese]

Haha

That made me laugh, but it didn't feel like anything special. But I'm not ignorant, I realize it wasn't a big project. So, yeah good job and all. Maybe someone will remix it one day.

7/10
5/5(Just because I can)

elace responds:

thanks man we were just messing around but im glad it made you laugh =)

[[Forever Mine]]

Hmmm.

Very killswitchy for sure. Like the style. I think maybe you could work a little more and create a more distinct lead guitar sound. You have really bad ass riffs and stuff, but I don't think adding a little bit soloing into your song would hurt, during 2:00 area mark would be perfect for a solo. Other than that great job. Drums sounded really tight especially.

10/10
5/5

deathkllr84 responds:

thanks man! I agree, I don't throw in enough leads anymore. Too much crunch.
I actually did a little solo 'thingy' around 2:00, it's just really quiet and panned to the right.

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