MetaLyric's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rotem at the Woods]

Boring.

There is nothing special about this picture. If the woman is beautiful, SHOW IT! Your not showing beauty by drawing her in fucking manga! A true artist captures every detail and doesn't try to hide it under a mask of cartoonish styles, or make up for their lack of skill by making old boring backgrounds. Do something different! A great artist is made, not by copying other styles, but by creating new ones! Realist, cubism, etc, those only became famous because people chose to try something new! So take my advice and try something new, and start becoming a leader.

0 out of a fucking 10

[Karitopia]

Meh.

They are very boring, there is nothing going on their. I mean, apart from using an anime style, you are also showing a lack of skill by not making them do anything. Coloring was horrible, the whole picture is full of cliches, the big guy who is all serious, two small people who look crazy and "ready to hurt someone like goku". End score: 3
Not the worst I have ever seen but definitely not the best. PM me if you ever do any real artwork (you know what I mean).

krazykartoons responds:

I agree ! I need to stop make those "Coloring was horrible" thinggy as you said.
and start draw real stuff such as STICK FIGURES !!! :)

Thanks for telling me this LOL^_^

[Joker]

Decent

I think the major points you should work on is making your lines blend in a little bit more, you know what I mean? Give it a little more negative space and contrast to make those features such as the mouth stand out, otherwise good work. Oh, and coloring it always helps to.

[Kinetic Kyle Poster]

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Not really that good. First of all, I can tell you really didn't bother sketching before you drew this. Second of all, you chose dark words, or as some would call them, emo, but you didn't back it up with the theme. Lastly, well , your style needs some reworking, and I mean a lot. It just isn't pretty to look at. I could of drawn this when I was ten. I mean the spikes on the floor look like banana peels. The background dots look horrible, not to mention that they don't add anything to the picture. The straight to pen style that I know and love looks like absolute shit. And your character, well apart from having a backwards rib cage, looks mentally retarded.

But, I can tell this project was rushed, and you probably didn't give this the most attention, so I am going to give you the benefit of the doubt as an artist. Next time you decide to sumbit something, put time and effort into it. Add some color, refine your curves, add shading, etc.

Final Score:
1/10

AshtonNextGen responds:

Thanks for the constructive review, the idea of the theme was an emo kid trapped in his own dark dimension (like a dark place for his mind) I was planning for a dark cave but it later spun out into an ice world of some kind, the dots were meant to be stars but looking at the reviews I guess it was hard to tell.
(P.S. the backwards rip cage was just a t-shirt btw)

[WAH BAM!]

Lol.

Pretty f'd up, but funny none the less. Do you use photoshop, or what? If you do I would love to get the original file with the layers seperate so I could give this an awesome coloring.

picod00de responds:

Emm Ess Paint

[The Zombie]

Learn anatomy of the human body.

Work on figuring outh what muscles look like underneath the body, and you could have a decent picture. Ohh, and the zombie text and random line really didn't help to much.

[Peach]

Honestly.

It looks like you took a picture of peach, ran it through a threshold, and Used a few filters in photoshop. If you were to make the picture good I would suggest adding a lot of color and possibly a background.

gesi1223 responds:

I don't use photoshop or any type of filters for little handdrawn things like this.

Also, I didn't want this to be in color when I made it otherwise I would have added some.

[Cero.]

Body proportions.

They are improper, especially the arms. Do you draw out your models before stylizing them, or do you just free hand? One other thing, I had trouble distinguishing whether it was a boy or a girl, so you might work on that.